Saturday, 8 September 2007

The Mystery Of The Hidden Ship Continues

The ship lay there. The black man had a meeting. '' It's just our luck Bill got jailed or else we will be able to run away with the jewels and make a living! '' Said a black man. Whispers went around Skull Island and they disappeared. Tommy was awarded a sack of gold for finding the culprit. Tommy went to the new mall to eat. He did not realise a man reading the Chicago paper eyeing him. '' Boss, the detective Tommy is here '' Spoke the guy. Tommy ate his lunch. A man in black ran to him with a knife. He pierced his body and ran away. '' Thank god that it only went to my ribs '' Said Tommy, three days later. The man in black spat on the floor. '' Boss, the detective Tommy is once again back. I can not believe it! We pierced his body! '' Spoke the an in black. Tommy stamped on a drain and the trap that the man in black planted opened. Down fell Tommy.

Friday, 7 September 2007

The Unveil Of The Mask Man

Tommy screamed. The mask man took a bommy-knocker and stepped forward. '' I've took off my mask, Tommy Detective, so get ready to die if your friend's parents do not give me $30, 000! '' Said the cold voice of the man. A BMW raced to the old warehouse. '' Well, well, the super family come to the rescue. 3 minutes shall do to your death!! Ha ha, hahahaha! '' Said the man and he left with a gun in his pocket. '' Help, help! '' Screamed Tommy. The bag of gold was now in the mask man's hand. Cheers were around; Tommy was saved! '' And now I will tell you who this cunning, evil mask man is!!! '' Announced Tommy. He ran to the hall and grabbed.... Bill! '' This is the mask man!!! '' Said Tommy. '' Liar, give me proof, Aleck Tommy! '' Screamed Bill. Tommy took the thing inside Bill's pocket. '' This is the proof! '' Said Tommy, lifting up the mask so that everybody could see. '' I'm so ashamed of you '' Shouted Bill's father. Tommy was glad. It was case closed!

Thursday, 6 September 2007

The Other Treasure Mystery

Never go to a website that you don't know, a shop you do not know because you might end up like Tommy or worse, you might be kidnapped. Take my advice. Tommy searched websites of mysterious man, hidden ships but could not find the picture of the two man. Finally, Tommy gave up and went to the new mall for lunch. While loitering in the back garden of the mall, Tommy saw one of the mysterious man. He raced to him as he fled. The mysterious man ran inside a little shop. '' That's strange. There was no shops on level 3.'' Thought Tommy. He went inside the shop. No man was in there. He turned backed and the mysterious man handcuffed him and suffocated him with a handkerchief. The mysterious man dragged Tommy inside a old warehouse. The mysterious man took off his mask and woke Tommy up. Tommy could not believe his eyes. '' Mum, there's a letter, a anonymous letter inside the CD pouch! '' Cried Bill. Sure there was and it wrote:


Dear Mrs/ Mr Neo,

I've kidnapped Tommy. Since your son and him are close buddys, I ask for $30,000 in 3 days or..... Tommy will die.


Wednesday, 5 September 2007

1 Year Old Sis's Birthday Party

I'm so glad. My sis is getting 1 year old this Saturday! Down at the function room, my mum will be ordering Neo Garden's buffet dinner. Today, CW brought me along to *AH to buy M&Ms, cookie wrappers, rasins, biscuits, wine cups, 12 packets of fruit juices and goodie bags. She went last Saturday to Concourse at Beach Road and bought pink decorations and balloons. CW and I made a video with a funny picture or video of my sis, sneezing in the olden times. * Find out if you see it there. Hope to see you this Saturday at the blue and pink confunction room. Thank you and the time is 6: 30.

Tuesday, 4 September 2007

Loan Sharks Waiting For Money

Did you know who the culprit is? Find out. Once the mum fainted again, Bill sobbed. '' WHO DID THIS!? '' Sobbed Bill. No-one noticed a small man in black hearing EVERY single word. This small man, like a dwarf, messaged his boss. '' Chief, I saw the little Bill boy, in a small hut '' Wrote the man. The boss laughed, he was going to kidnap Bill! Tommy ran inside his headquarters and... it was ransacked!!! BANG! Went the small man's gun but he missed his target, he shot his boss, nearby! The man was so terrified that he fled to the other countries. Tommy thought the man and dead boss ringed a bell, but where did he meet them? Aha, the mystery of the hidden ship's gangsters! Tommy rang the officer to come. Darn it, no answer. Still, Tommy had thought of a plan.... go there myself!